Wrong: When the subject reported being finished, the experimenter asked him to complete a second questionnaire.
Right: When the subject reported being finished, the experimenter administered a second questionnaire.
Wrong: Each subject rated their own mood on the questionnaire.
Right: Each subject rated his or her own mood on the questionnaire.
Right: All subjects rated their own moods on
the questionnaire.
Wrong: A variety of issues were presented at the meeting.
Right: A variety of issues was presented at the meeting.
Use a comma when separating main clauses:
Wrong: We are here on this planet once and we might as well get a feel for the place.
Right: We are here on this planet once, and we might as well
get a feel for the place.
Set off parenthetical material within commas.
Wrong: Sometimes people gossip as Barbara Walters has observed because they want to be interesting.
Right: Sometimes people gossip, as Barbara Walters has observed,
because they want to be interesting.
Avoid unnecessary commas.
Wrong: The facts were selected, and organized with care.
Right: The facts were selected and organized with care.
Wrong: The Air Force debunked UFO sightings, but, millions of Americans didn't listen.
Right: The Air Force debunked UFO sightings, but millions of Americans didn't listen.
Wrong: And for days tried to change my mind. (no subject)
Right: For days he/she/it tried to change my mind.
Wrong: Its time for a change.
Right: It's time for a change.
Wrong: What is it's purpose?
Right: What is its purpose?
Wrong: The experimental manipulation caused an interesting affect.
Right: The experimental manipulation caused an interesting effect.
Wrong: The intervention did not effect the behavior of the therapy group.
Right: The intervention did not affect the behavior of the therapy group.
Wrong: The student's faculty advisor was very committed to their learning.
Right: The students' faculty advisor was very committed to their learning. (if more than one student)
Right: The student's faculty advisor was very committed to
her
learning. (if only one female student)
Do not use an apostrophe to indicate a plural form of a word. Only use it to indicate possession.
Wrong: The student's all have busy schedules.
Right: The students all have busy schedules.
Wrong: The college student sample was smarter than the high school sample.
Right: The college-student sample was smarter than the high-school
sample.
Wrong: A completely-new product was put on the market today.
Right: A completely new product was put on the market today.